Review

I am going to review everything that we are going to do in the thriller and add some new ideas that I feel would be good in the thriller. It’s going to start with the serial killer walking into the school. At no point in the whole thriller with the killer’s face be shown. This will add to the effect and build tension because the killer’s identity will never be shown. The killer will walk thought the building looking for his victim. I was thinking about wither the killer should kill a few girls or if he should just stalk the one girl. I feel that it would be more effective and we could make it more interesting if the killer only stalks one girl. We could have lots of camera angles where it is point of view of the killer watching the girl. This would build lots of tension and make the piece scarier because the viewer would worry for the life of the girl. I want to show people around the school at some points, but I don’t want anyone to notice the killer is there. Me and my partner will have to get together to talk about the different ways of doing this and not showing the killer.